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Friday, 17 January 2014

Five Sentence Fiction.

The prompt for this weeks five sentence fiction is CLUTCH.
Below is my take on the prompt and if you want to read more great five sentence stories follow the link here to find them.
http://lilliemcferrin.com/five-sentence-fiction-clutch/

CLUTCH

Her white crystal studded clutch bag was a present from him, the sharp scissors within it hers. The bag was his way of saying sorry. Sorry he was caught cheating she reckoned. She breathed easier now that she had dealt with the issue and clutched the expensive bag closer to her, its sparse contents surprising if anyone should take a look. Still she would love to see his face when he saw the alterations she did to his designer suits before she left him. 


Happy writing !

6 comments:

  1. If he thinks a clutch would make up for that, he needs a few more lessons in romance. Very good!

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  2. You might want to consider another word in place of "reckoned," which seems out of step with the overall upscale tone of the piece. Other than that, I loved this tiny tale of revenge. Bravo!

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  3. Thank you all for stopping by, I appreciate it.

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  4. Love the use of his gift and her revenge. I'd love to see his cheating face too. x

    http://40somethingundomesticateddevil.blogspot.co.uk/2014/01/five-sentence-fiction-clutch.html

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  5. Yes Lizzie, I would like to be a fly on his wall when he finds out. :)

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