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Tuesday, 11 March 2014

FSF - St Patrick is Furious !

This weeks prompt on Lillie McFerrin is FURIOUS. For more great Five Sentence Fiction, please visit her site for others take on this prompt at  http://lilliemcferrin.com/five-sentence-fiction-furious

St Patrick's Furious!

St. Patrick sat in the Heavenly sky and wept in fury. Many miles he traveled over this emerald isle and had gathered the people together, while banishing snakes and other nasty creatures. But now the country was thrown into recession, the people struggling, while those guilty walked free. How had he overlooked the most obvious of poison that crawled among the good and faithful? 
Tapping him on the shoulder St. Peter spoke wisely, 
"Don't fret Patrick, those bankers and politicians won't get through our Pearly Gates!" 

7 comments:

  1. At last! Huzzah! About time the bankers and politicians got their come uppance...

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  2. Brilliant, Mary. A very clever story and so topical!

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  3. WELL DONE

    But, I wouldn't underestimate the power of any banker or politician for they're always finding ways of getting around any barrier.

    BTW - You've used SIX sentences. :-) :-) :-)

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    1. Have I Robin? I thought I had only written five, oh well, my intentions were good :)

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