Tuesday, 11 March 2014

FSF - St Patrick is Furious !

This weeks prompt on Lillie McFerrin is FURIOUS. For more great Five Sentence Fiction, please visit her site for others take on this prompt at  http://lilliemcferrin.com/five-sentence-fiction-furious

St Patrick's Furious!

St. Patrick sat in the Heavenly sky and wept in fury. Many miles he traveled over this emerald isle and had gathered the people together, while banishing snakes and other nasty creatures. But now the country was thrown into recession, the people struggling, while those guilty walked free. How had he overlooked the most obvious of poison that crawled among the good and faithful? 
Tapping him on the shoulder St. Peter spoke wisely, 
"Don't fret Patrick, those bankers and politicians won't get through our Pearly Gates!" 


  1. At last! Huzzah! About time the bankers and politicians got their come uppance...

  2. Brilliant, Mary. A very clever story and so topical!


    But, I wouldn't underestimate the power of any banker or politician for they're always finding ways of getting around any barrier.

    BTW - You've used SIX sentences. :-) :-) :-)

  4. This comment has been removed by the author.

    1. Have I Robin? I thought I had only written five, oh well, my intentions were good :)

  5. CitySpidey is India's first and definitive platform for hyper local community news, RWA Management Solutions and Account Billing Software for Housing Societies. We also offer residential soceity news of Noida, Dwarka, Indirapuram, Gurgaon and Faridabad. You can place advertisement for your business on city spidey.

    Gate Management System
    Society Management App
    Society Management
    rwa Management App
    Neighbourhood Management App
    Apartment Management App
    Apartment Management System
    Visitors Management System
    Apartment Management Software
    Noida News
    Gurgaon News
    Ghaziabad News
    Delhi News
    Indirapuram News


  6. We are leading responsive website designing and development company in Noida.
    We are offering mobile friendly responsive website designing, website development, e-commerce website, seo service and sem services in Noida.

    Responsive Website Designing Company in Noida
    Website Designing Company in Noida
    SEO Services in Noida
    SMO Services in Noida

  7. We are uhe solid first platform for modeling newcomers to achieve there new dreams. The first to train and promote out models at our expense to avoid burden on them. Join the most popular agency if you modelling jobs in Delhi for female freshers, models, students, housewives aiming to start there modeling career. We are top modelling agency in Delhi offering modelling jobs in Delhi for upcoming female freshers or experienced models who want to join lingerie modeling agencies.

    modeling agencies in Delhi
    modeling agencies
    modeling jobs
    modeling auditions
    model coordinators
    modeling jobs in Delhi