Tuesday, 31 March 2015

Five Sentence Fiction - Entrance

Each week , Lillie McFerrin challenges writers to write a story in FIVE sentences, sharing a prompt to start them off. 
This weeks prompt is Entrance. 

Below is my offering for this week. 
Enjoy others by following the link to discover what other writers have shared. http://lilliemcferrin.com/ 

The winding avenue carpeted with daffodils beneath the mighty Horse Chestnuts heralded a magnificent entrance to McGregor Castle. The tourists disembarked eagerly from their luxury coach. 
"Welcome to my home, I am the Earl of Blackthorn Estate, 700 years in the family," James spoke with distaste for these unwanted but financially necessary guests.  
"Wow, 700 years, that sure makes a good span for ghosts and skeletons in the closet then," a large voice boomed in a hearty manner from the group. 
"Oh indeed, but it is not the dead you should fear but the living, and by that I mean the hungry rats beneath the floorboards," James responded in a serious tone.


  1. A very Lovecraftian little tale!

    Now that poor fellow will be awake all night wondering what caused that sound he heard...

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  2. Atmospheric, succinct and well crafted.
    Loved it.

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