Having had a lovely trip to Bochum, Germany in August, it
was time I got back to my daily writing duties. While on holiday, I read a fair
bit, (writing magazines, cover to cover and The Soul Catcher by Alex Kava) and decided to give
myself a break from scribbling. But the pen is a mighty weapon and sure enough,
a few days into the holiday, I was out the door and down to the shops to buy
yet another new notebook. Then I found a comfortable spot near the balcony in the
evening sun and took a deep breath. I was off. I wrote two short stories,
titled When Love’s not Enough and Welcome Home. Below are just random
feelings I had when I stopped to pause and take in my surroundings.
Inside the apartment,
early evening
Air clammy, heat oppressive
Headache settling, eyes tired
Talk ceasing, silence heavy
Clock ticking, no other sound
Headache settling, eyes tired
Talk ceasing, silence heavy
Clock ticking, no other sound
Outside the apartment,
same time
Trees rustling their leaves
Cars rumbling by,
People mumbling, sun shining hides behind the clouds
Washing blows, drying slowly.
Cars rumbling by,
People mumbling, sun shining hides behind the clouds
Washing blows, drying slowly.
Too quickly my holiday was over and while at the airport
waiting to board a late evening flight I got out my trusty new notebook and again my thoughts were
put to paper. Not quite Haikiu but yet it recorded my feelings and that’s all
that counts.
(1)Pale blue skies cloudy
Near the end of the day now
Aeroplane waiting.
Near the end of the day now
Aeroplane waiting.
(2)Lure of foreign words
Large advertising boards
Promising new sights
Large advertising boards
Promising new sights
(3)Children laugh and chat
Parents weary yet watchful
Waiting area their park.
My collection of notebooks is growing all the time. I should make it easier and just bring one every time I go away. But the thrill of choosing a notebook and filling the blank pages is a buzz I love so who am I to stop my enjoyment of shopping. Happy writing.
Parents weary yet watchful
Waiting area their park.
My collection of notebooks is growing all the time. I should make it easier and just bring one every time I go away. But the thrill of choosing a notebook and filling the blank pages is a buzz I love so who am I to stop my enjoyment of shopping. Happy writing.
Mary, I think your haiku like holiday diary is super,way to do it, captured in a nutshell literally. Thinking of you :) Maire x
ReplyDeleteExcellent Mary. Thanks for sharing!
ReplyDeleteThank you Máire and Marie for dropping by and leaving lovely comments.
ReplyDelete