Friday, 15 March 2013

5 Sentence Fiction

It is that time again folks for this week's 5 Sentence Fiction Challenge. This weeks prompt is Paradise. Enjoy reading my offering below and check out the other entries at the following link and discover other writers take on the same prompt. www.lilliemcferrin.com

Forgiven.
 
He wondered what will it hold for him. He never thought with the way he lived his life, it would be open to him. The pain he was suffering now was worth it he reasoned, he deserved it, unlike the guy next to him.The clouds gathered overhead and darkened the afternoon sky. He had no fear, the Man crucified beside him promised him Paradise.





8 comments:

  1. I love this. This is excellent.

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  2. Interesting point of view, especially with Easter coming up.

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    1. Yes I thought of Easter when I saw the prompt, thank you for commenting.

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