A Lullaby Whisper
She sang a lullaby each
night by the cream cradle. Her soft voice soothing the baby’s crying. Staying
until her husband would come to check on the child. Then she would whisper
goodnight to her sleeping baby. Fading in to the night before returning to the spirit world.
Lovely tale, Mary - a great example of a five sentence fiction piece.
ReplyDeleteThank you Daniel for reading and for lovely comment
DeleteI did not see that twist coming. Absolutely beautifully written story. It brought tears to my eyes. Great take on the prompt. Well done.
ReplyDeleteThanks Marie, I enjoy the challenge. I loved your entry too
DeleteSuch a sad, sweet tale. Love endures.
ReplyDeleteOhhhh! Hauntingly beautiful.
ReplyDeleteThis is such beautiful story. It is haunting, yet very sweet. This is the kind of folktale my Granny told. I love it.
ReplyDeleteThank you Ann, your comment is very kind.
DeleteThe bond between a mother and a child cannot be broken, even by the limitations of life and death. You wrote this with such tenderness, sad but very sweet.
ReplyDeleteThank you Josie for such kind comments. I am glad you enjoyed it.
DeleteThis is so beautiful yet so very sad. So much emotion in 5 sentences. x
ReplyDeleteThank you for stopping by and reading it Lizzie.
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